Composition(20pts): 15 Hints at a foreground, middle, background I think a bit more modeling would make the things closest to us make it look more 3D (for instance the nose) and darks could be make darker gradually to give us more of a sense of a rounded head.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 17 I wonder if adding objects or words would help the piece. He seems to have a lot of water and land that isn't intentional.
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16- Very nice. The ear seems to need more contrast
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the new direction you are going in but I think the purple coloring that you were trying to incorporate might give it unity. Maybe you could add prismacolor purple or ink. The dripping might incorporate the area around him too.
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteComposition(20pts): 15 Hints at a foreground, middle, background
ReplyDeleteI think a bit more modeling would make the things closest to us make it look more 3D (for instance the nose) and darks could be make darker gradually to give us more of a sense of a rounded head.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 17 I wonder if adding objects or words would help the piece. He seems to have a lot of water and land that isn't intentional.
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16- Very nice. The ear seems to need more contrast
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the new direction you are going in but I think the purple coloring that you were trying to incorporate might give it unity. Maybe you could add prismacolor purple or ink. The dripping might incorporate the area around him too.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent!
85