Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, but no background. I would say to invest a bit more there, at the very least you can crop. Maybe dripping if it adds to the art, maybe something entirely different and unexpected.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16- Nice silhouette! I Wonder if one more coat would help?
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the feeling and the reference you chose. Is there a way to make it more personal perhaps?
I have seen this in person now and see that it needs reworking. The bubbling is not going to work. I would suggest we put it in photoshop and use the drop bucket and make a clean silhouette. You can use that and paint on it from there. So the craftsmanship drops it to a 79 as is. I know we can fix it with another hour or so though.
Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, but no background. I would say to invest a bit more there, at the very least you can crop. Maybe dripping if it adds to the art, maybe something entirely different and unexpected.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16- Nice silhouette! I Wonder if one more coat would help?
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the feeling and the reference you chose. Is there a way to make it more personal perhaps?
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent!
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I have seen this in person now and see that it needs reworking. The bubbling is not going to work. I would suggest we put it in photoshop and use the drop bucket and make a clean silhouette. You can use that and paint on it from there. So the craftsmanship drops it to a 79 as is. I know we can fix it with another hour or so though.
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