Composition(20pts): 20 Good balance of the foreground, middle, background. The area around it could be more broken up by under sea life, it seems pretty plain.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 10 I like the simplicity you chose of turning it black and white but I think it is hard to make out what is happening and it stands out by itself as the only real black and white (except the first one which is not done). I put a filtered version (more purple) in your drop box. If you like the idea you can play with it. Plus I think a white boarder might echo the white snow. We can compare it to the others.
Creativity (10pts): 5 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time! 85 We can discuss improvements as we lay them all out together and the overall grade can be higher if we tie it together with elements such as purple, maps, boarders, etc. So the ones that are not really visually cohesive can be improved. Good work, I look forward to your last one :)
Composition(20pts): 20 Good balance of the foreground, middle, background. The area around it could be more broken up by under sea life, it seems pretty plain.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 10 I like the simplicity you chose of turning it black and white but I think it is hard to make out what is happening and it stands out by itself as the only real black and white (except the first one which is not done). I put a filtered version (more purple) in your drop box. If you like the idea you can play with it. Plus I think a white boarder might echo the white snow. We can compare it to the others.
Creativity (10pts): 5 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time!
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We can discuss improvements as we lay them all out together and the overall grade can be higher if we tie it together with elements such as purple, maps, boarders, etc. So the ones that are not really visually cohesive can be improved. Good work, I look forward to your last one :)