Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, but no background. I like the way her arm takes our eye to his face. I think we should crop closely, the floating white area on the left doesn't read. And the left side should come in.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16- I love the likeness and the idea. I wonder if the coats could've been a bit more even?
Creativity (10pts): 7 I like the repeat but I thought you were going to add a silhouette? its ok as is but pretty straightforward and simple. Your concentration is unified and that is good. I wonder, on the next one, if you can think outside the box a bit and take some elements from all these so far and have a piece "spring out of" where you are now. Not sure how that would look but we could play with the cigar boxes again or maybe a different surface. I think you last two should be a crescendo (big ending) of all your pieces. Wow them! If its complicated enough we could use a close up and have two pieces.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time :) 85
Composition(20pts): 15 Good foreground, middle, but no background. I like the way her arm takes our eye to his face. I think we should crop closely, the floating white area on the left doesn't read. And the left side should come in.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16- I love the likeness and the idea. I wonder if the coats could've been a bit more even?
Creativity (10pts): 7 I like the repeat but I thought you were going to add a silhouette? its ok as is but pretty straightforward and simple. Your concentration is unified and that is good. I wonder, on the next one, if you can think outside the box a bit and take some elements from all these so far and have a piece "spring out of" where you are now. Not sure how that would look but we could play with the cigar boxes again or maybe a different surface. I think you last two should be a crescendo (big ending) of all your pieces. Wow them! If its complicated enough we could use a close up and have two pieces.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time :)
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